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foreverwithyou
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0 posted 2002-11-04 10:30 PM


Sitting here in this perfect world
I wonder if it is really all that perfect anymore.
Bloodstained hands.
What have I done???
Why did I do such a thing?
But I will live with it alwayz.


"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

[This message has been edited by foreverwithyou (11-04-2002 10:33 PM).]

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foreverwithyou
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1 posted 2002-11-04 10:31 PM


Hope yall like it !!and now for the best smiley ever!!! No no no i didnt do anything ppl!!!

"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

[This message has been edited by foreverwithyou (11-04-2002 10:34 PM).]

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2 posted 2002-11-04 10:32 PM


Omg... sweet swirling onion rings, Cath!! What did you do!?

AhhH!!
the world has all gone mad!
(omg omg omg, IM me, i wanna tell u sumtin)

good job man.. cept for the whole wrong thing u did.

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3 posted 2002-11-04 11:31 PM


Lol... like the "alwayz" at the end, wrecked the tone... hehe...

And I SO use that smiley all the time...   See?

Groovy.

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4 posted 2002-11-05 01:08 AM


I like the mystery!!! It raises a great point though of how some things are irreversible...some things your left to live with for the rest of your life and that can be terrifying! Ohhhh but i really wish i knew what u did!!

Sometimes I get so weird
I even freak myself out
I laugh myself to sleep
It's my lullaby

aVriL lAvIgNe

devinechild22
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5 posted 2002-11-05 04:37 PM


  I like it. I would like to hear how u enterprate it. What does the bloodstaind hands stand 4? pleze post your reply. I`d like to hear..I am also srry bout what katie said today. I was tryin to get her to stop but she doest like u much.
                *Allison*

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6 posted 2002-11-05 08:11 PM


catherine middle name rudzinski!(i wont tell ur midlle name)
no, but i liked this one
or should i call u sugar(lmao)
anywayz this was good
~sam~

!respect the alphabet!

foreverwithyou
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7 posted 2002-11-05 09:48 PM


ALLISON-I am not 2 fond of katie either i wonder why she dont like me hmmm i will have to think about that one who wouldnt like me???j/j u and your parents for example.bloodstained hands means like that the person murdered someone DUH!!!no j/j but if u want your Cd back walk over and get it anytime u want to MAN i just dont want to fight with u and call u names like u did to me and sam over and bals

SAM-Those guyz were talkin to u man and only u and no new commandment:thou shall not call me sugar.LOL
   THANX FOR REPLYING YALL!!!

"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

[This message has been edited by foreverwithyou (11-05-2002 09:51 PM).]

devinechild22
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8 posted 2002-11-06 04:00 PM


No No NO. You`ve got it all wrong. My parents like you they just dont like some of the things you have done to upset me maybe without you even knowing it upset me. O yea! I remember when you murdered that guy! LOL. j/j. I dont wanna be in a fight lets all just apologise and bo kool? Sound good? Give me a call or im me. What ever is kool. OOOOO!!! "Lose Yourself" is on!!!! I gotta go dance like a dumba**. I`m sick tho. I can barely get out of my chair without Fallin on my a**. LOL. Dale was on a bit ago. LOL. He never said anything tho. W0o0o0o Im tired. I`ll ttyl. Bye.
           *Allison*

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9 posted 2002-11-06 04:01 PM


P.S. I dunno why anybody would dislike YOU! You are just perfect.LOL.
                  *Allison*

foreverwithyou
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10 posted 2002-11-06 06:41 PM


ok but i  thought that b4 we were stupid, dumb, jerks, "beeps", and we needed to get a life? whut happened to that?oh yes and that we couldnt be good friends if someone payed us and that u deserved better???not trying to start anything plz just answer these few questions

"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

foreverwithyou
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11 posted 2002-11-06 08:17 PM


oh and allison reply via email or postin but there is always AIM

"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

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