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clumsy
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since 2002-10-10
Posts 106
canada.

0 posted 2002-11-04 05:32 PM


i
want
to
un-
dress
you
maybe
then
it
will
work
out.

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StellarChica
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since 2002-07-06
Posts 207
floating down a river...
1 posted 2002-11-04 07:36 PM


I liked this. I really did. Short and simple and awesome.
clumsy
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since 2002-10-10
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canada.
2 posted 2002-11-04 07:48 PM


thanks.
Morgana Le Fay
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Posts 22

3 posted 2002-11-04 08:31 PM


I really like this. Maybe I get way too symbolic/philisophical sometimes, but I saw quite a few different ways of taking this.

Wonderful.

Short but sooo rich.

by the woods, you hear it creeping, and you know, they're the blood in you

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Riding
4 posted 2002-11-04 09:08 PM


Oooh, I like
Ina
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5 posted 2002-11-04 09:47 PM


now i feel like getting nekkid and running around the street in the snow....lol
i liked this beaucoup. wait a sec, are you saying nekkidness cures all? cuz it does!!!!!

regina

[This message has been edited by Ina (11-04-2002 09:49 PM).]

cherish
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since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........
6 posted 2002-11-04 10:06 PM





(HAD to do it....just had to... )

Nicely done

Are you scared?                            BOO! Are you now?

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