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PoetryIsLife
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...in my boxers...

0 posted 2002-11-04 01:00 AM


People do wonder about me.
Others don't notice, though.
Everyone has their ability to be,
Their own existence to pursue.
Relatively few realize this.
Yesterday, I fell in love again.
In my heart, each day anew
She gives me hope, peace.
Love is beyond mere beauty.
In this city of angels I live,
Feeling her so near,
Every day all the more far.

[This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (11-04-2002 01:02 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-11-04 03:58 PM


Wow, Titus... you really did answer this challenge quite well.  I really liked the poem, you comprimised between personal description and event in a very expert manner.

You've succeeded here, Titus.  And you've impressed me as well.  

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

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2 posted 2002-11-04 05:04 PM


Ti, you already know what I think of this one, but I'll say it again. Wow. I'm still speechless, and everytime I read it, I love it even more *hugs*
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3 posted 2002-11-04 05:27 PM


wow, this was awesome.....
it seemed sad to me....
i really enjoyed this alot,
keep on sharing

Regina

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4 posted 2002-11-04 08:26 PM


"Yesterday, I fell in love again."

I love this line. It's wonderful. I can't quite explain why, so don't ask.

by the woods, you hear it creeping, and you know, they're the blood in you

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5 posted 2002-11-05 01:11 AM


I've really gotta figure out what this challenge is and then i'll be a lil more "clued in". But N e wayz i loved it ti Great job as always sweety!!!

Sometimes I get so weird
I even freak myself out
I laugh myself to sleep
It's my lullaby

aVriL lAvIgNe

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6 posted 2002-11-05 01:52 AM


Michele - in the Teen Poetry forum, just above the topics list is a mail icon that says Teen Poetry Challenge #2.  Click on that to see the challenge.  
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7 posted 2002-11-05 11:19 AM


I must say that I really enjoyed reading this poem. I am in awe...such talent...great poem!

-Jeanette-

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8 posted 2002-11-05 02:56 PM



Titus~
You already know how much I love this one,
but I'll tell you again.
I see so much of 'you' in this piece.
It's like a sneak peek at your heart.
Very well done, my friend.
Challenge met and exceeded.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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