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foreverwithyou
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since 2002-10-20
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Wonderland

0 posted 2002-11-03 10:54 PM



See that star?
Shining bright?
I wished upon that star one night.
I wished for you.
To be with me.
And here you are.
For all to see.

© Copyright 2002 Cathy - All Rights Reserved
foreverwithyou
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1 posted 2002-11-03 10:57 PM


man i hope this one didnt stink as much as i thought it might hope yall like it i like these faces LOL


[This message has been edited by foreverwithyou (11-03-2002 11:00 PM).]

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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since 2002-07-02
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I am everywhere
2 posted 2002-11-03 10:58 PM


When you wish.. apon a star.. makes no differece who you aarrree!
..sorry man- i watched Rocket Man today. lol

good poem man.. you're good with all that rhyming stuff-i'm not.

i'm tired.. I want to sleep, and dream, and smell my jacket.
lol

ttys,

Sara

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3 posted 2002-11-04 03:25 PM


Very nice!  I love the use of iambs... this took me like three seconds to read, and I didn't miss anything in it.

Very, very cute poem... I love what you've done here.

Parasite

PrincessNets
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4 posted 2002-11-04 07:09 PM


I would just like to say that I enjoyed your poem very much.  I think that the rhyme scheme fits very well with this poem. I love it and I can't wait to read more of your poetry.

-Jeanette-

PrincessNets
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5 posted 2002-11-04 07:17 PM


I would just like to say that I enjoyed your poem very much.  I think that the rhyme scheme fits very well with this poem. I love it and I can't wait to read more of your poetry.

-Jeanette-

PrincessNets
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6 posted 2002-11-04 07:22 PM


I loved your poem! I really enjoyed reading it! I can't wait to read more of your poetry!
PrincessNets
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7 posted 2002-11-04 07:23 PM


I loved your poem! I really enjoyed reading it! I can't wait to read more of your poetry!
Connel
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8 posted 2002-11-04 09:44 PM


Good poem dude..

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

cherish
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since 2001-03-25
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swimming in fairy floss...........
9 posted 2002-11-04 09:47 PM


Cute Cath, very nice

Are you scared?                            BOO! Are you now?

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