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Pollita
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since 2002-07-25
Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

0 posted 2002-11-03 07:50 PM



Everything that I feel,
Everything that I think.
Life has brought.
You wanted to know what the problem was,
It’s me and it’s life.
It’s also the fact that everyday I cry.
You say in crying there is no weakness,
But don’t you see…
I am the weakness.
Everything that he feels,
Things that make me cry insanely,
That damages my chances of being alright in the end.
You say that I can get through this,
But what if I can’t?
What if I just let my emotions,
Take over my soul.
This pain I feel,
Is the torture that life has most definitely brought.
There is no way out,
Except death.
And no you don’t have to worry,
I won’t let that happen.
All I can do is cry,
I have no one to lean on except those 2 people.
They are important to me,
But one is going through too much…
And when he feels that way,
I feel it to.
Sometimes I’m just about to do,
Things that I know I shouldn’t do…
But everything that I feel deep inside,
Life has brought.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~**~&~*~**~*~*~*~**~*~*~*
Peoples don't worry...It's not as bad as it may seem...Or maybe it is...I don't know what to think anymore!
But don't worry!

© Copyright 2002 Delaniie Quirk - All Rights Reserved
cherish
Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........
1 posted 2002-11-03 08:23 PM


I just hope you start looking up soon Del....

Are you scared?                            BOO! Are you now?

Pollita
Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity
2 posted 2002-11-03 09:05 PM


Aww cherish!
Ya i hope so too..but it doesn't seem likely!...scary as it may sound...

Local Parasite
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since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg
3 posted 2002-11-04 02:02 PM


I'm not worried about you, Del.  You're a smart kid, you know how to handle yourself.  

Loved the poem.

Parasite

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