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lil cherry
since 10-02-2002
Posts 97
Ont, Can.

0 posted 11-02-2002 06:48 PM       View Profile for lil cherry   Email lil cherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lil cherry

For this pain to go away
What has happened to you
You were so comfortably happy yesterday
But now your insides are burning
Your stomach is your new worst enemy
It hurts every time you inhale
Fire then ice
But the pain never stops
Make it all go away
What I wouldnít do to take just one more
Use just once more
Just to end this torture
If hell is like this
Then I hope Iím never there
But no nothing could be this bad
I canít move my muscles are like bricks
And yet I feel like Iíve been running a marathon
Everything hurts
Iím hungry but canít eat
Iím thirsty but canít drink
My insides are melting
Everything is wasting away
The happiness has all flowed out of me
Leaving this shell
This lifeless creature lying there
Someone kill me
I canít endure this anymore
Just once more
I promise Iíll stop after that
I can control it
Just not tonight
Please one more pill, one more line
I need it
Itís killing me
Thousands of tiny ants eating away at my flesh
Iím burning
Iím in ice
I canít think
I canít breath
I canít cry anymore
Iím consumed
Help me, someone please help me
No one can hear my cries
Who can I tell
Who would understand
My drugs would
They always listened
But I canít move to get to them
My head is about to explode
How will I go on without them
How much longer will this last
Just once more
Just one more time
And then itís over

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since 10-20-2002
Posts 209

1 posted 11-02-2002 07:14 PM       View Profile for foreverwithyou   Email foreverwithyou   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for foreverwithyou

jeez this was awesome!!!!It totally lived up to its title I thought that this poem was written extremley well!!good write!

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since 08-17-2001
Posts 515
LI, New York

2 posted 11-02-2002 07:42 PM       View Profile for HopelessRomanticGuy   Email HopelessRomanticGuy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HopelessRomanticGuy

WOW!  That was incredible!  I loved the way this was written, if felt as if I were right there, experiencing those things!  Incredible poem!  Keep it up!  


"You can't hurt meee!!  'Cause I've got on my cheeeeese helmet!"

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since 11-05-2001
Posts 2929
Transylconia, Winnipeg

3 posted 11-04-2002 11:19 AM       View Profile for Local Parasite   Email Local Parasite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Local Parasite's Home Page   View IP for Local Parasite

Very nice work!  This is very vivid and expressed with great power the subject matter... you very clearly illustrated the self-destructive path of substance abuse.

Well done.

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since 11-27-2003
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nowhere special

4 posted 05-07-2004 12:04 AM       View Profile for kissa~rachelle   Email kissa~rachelle   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kissa~rachelle

I know what you mean.... going through the exact same thing.. onlyu it isnt pills. All i have to say, is weed is more addicting than people really think it is, and i wish i had never started.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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