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Withdrawel |
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lil cherry Member
since 2002-10-02
Posts 86Ont, Can. 
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Sweating Crying Screaming Dreaming Wishing Praying For this pain to go away What has happened to you You were so comfortably happy yesterday But now your insides are burning Your stomach is your new worst enemy It hurts every time you inhale Fire then ice But the pain never stops Make it all go away What I wouldn’t do to take just one more Use just once more Just to end this torture If hell is like this Then I hope I’m never there But no nothing could be this bad I can’t move my muscles are like bricks And yet I feel like I’ve been running a marathon Everything hurts I’m hungry but can’t eat I’m thirsty but can’t drink My insides are melting Everything is wasting away The happiness has all flowed out of me Leaving this shell This lifeless creature lying there Someone kill me I can’t endure this anymore Just once more I promise I’ll stop after that I can control it Just not tonight Please one more pill, one more line I need it It’s killing me Thousands of tiny ants eating away at my flesh I’m burning I’m in ice I can’t think I can’t breath I can’t cry anymore I’m consumed Help me, someone please help me No one can hear my cries Who can I tell Who would understand My drugs would They always listened But I can’t move to get to them My head is about to explode How will I go on without them How much longer will this last Just once more Just one more time And then it’s over |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
jeez this was awesome!!!!It totally lived up to its title I thought that this poem was written extremley well!!good write!  |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
WOW! That was incredible! I loved the way this was written, if felt as if I were right there, experiencing those things! Incredible poem! Keep it up! -Rich "You can't hurt meee!! 'Cause I've got on my cheeeeese helmet!" |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Very nice work! This is very vivid and expressed with great power the subject matter... you very clearly illustrated the self-destructive path of substance abuse. Well done. Parasite |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I know what you mean.... going through the exact same thing.. onlyu it isnt pills. All i have to say, is weed is more addicting than people really think it is, and i wish i had never started. I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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