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Teen Poetry #6

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devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

0 posted 2002-11-01 11:37 PM

why do you have to be so complicated
cant we be friends
i dont want this to be the end
memories willl stay locked up
feelings hurt
hearts broken
why dont you give this frindship a chance
dont give up this friendship
like a gobstopper
everlasting

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

1 posted 2002-11-02 12:13 PM

gobstoppers are good......
like this..
like.. (lol- NEVERMIND)

take care, great job.

"i told you i'd never say goodbye . now i'm slipping on the tears you made me cry but that's what i get"

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

2 posted 2002-11-02 11:42 AM

this was really good i like the gobstopper thing that was cool
fantastic write

~sam~

!respect the alphabet!

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

3 posted 2002-11-02 01:33 PM

Tahnk you! Thank you! (bows with a smile) LOL.
*Allison*

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

4 posted 2002-11-04 11:11 AM

I love the gobstopper thing... haha... it really sent the tone for a spin, and caught me off guard.

Great work.

Parasite

foreverwithyou
Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 204
Wonderland

5 posted 2002-11-04 09:11 PM

I liker gobstobberz MAN!!!

"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

[This message has been edited by foreverwithyou (11-04-2002 09:23 PM).]

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

6 posted 2002-11-04 09:42 PM

i cant stand gobstoppers, but i liked the way your poem ended, it was light but sad and the same time. nice work

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