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Nothing Else To Say |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
I remember when I met you. It was love at first sight. I remember when I kissed you. You said you'd seen the light. You said we'd never part. And to this day I'm still with you. You'd never break my heart. I have all my faith in you. I love you baby. And there's nothing else to say. |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
hope this one didnt stink  |
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Darkness Member
since 2002-10-17
Posts 202The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies. |
It didn't stink. It was good. I am a helpless romantic and that is exactly I feel about my girlfriend. I love the rhymes. Darkness |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
good. *Allison* |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
lol.. u said baby.. Omg.. ask sam and see if she remebers... this one time.. a LONG LONG time ago- i wrote this thing, and sam read it, and it said baby a couple of times- and she made fun of me about it for like.. 2 months.. i scarred me for life. :balling: yea- good write tho.. true emotions. "i see your true colors-" omg.. i'm fine |
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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
Hey, I'm not sure if I like this or not, maybe like a bit more imaginary or something. Well thats my two cents casue thats my style. But I dunno. Ri ~*I'm not gonna say I'm gorgeous, that for you to decide, if you really wanna know me, see the world through my eyes*~ |
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Alone Afraid n' Away Junior Member
since 2002-10-28
Posts 19 |
It was really good |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
thanx guyz  "I am who I am who I am who am I?" |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
oh by the way sara!!u spelt bawling wrong lol thats why it didnt work yo hahaa ok im fine anywayz thank you!!! (bawling would be...  "I am who I am who I am who am I?" |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
hehe....:P.... bye bye now...good write~*Pain strikes my heart, water drips down my face, I now stand in front of you, full of shame and disgrace*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
foreverwithyou~ I really enjoyed this write. I thought you expressed these thoughts quite well. Nicely done.  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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rimmie Junior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 45Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada |
I really like this one, I thought it really sweet and straight to the point and i like the end. It expressed how you trully felt! Great Job!  ~RuZ~ |
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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
did i reply to this one??? i guess not but if i did then i just didnt see it , but it was good ~sam~ |
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clve527 Member
since 2002-07-08
Posts 200 |
Try writing without cliches. Casey |
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