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RedStoneEB
Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2003-06-09 03:40 PM


I fall into that time loop
Replaying things in mind
The way it would have been
If I didn’t say them things

Why did I have to leave your side
And wonder into that lonely life
Crying and hurting deep inside

So what if you cheated on me
Least I would be happy within
Or maybe I just lie to myself

The pain covering my mind
Confusing it all the time
Beating myself up inside

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littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-06-12 01:35 AM


Ohh man - we all do this . . .

geez I can relate to this too

please know that things will look up
you just need to belive in you
and this loss?

yeah . . . always looking back arent we?
That is what makes us real . . .
xxoo

LegalSecret69
Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 69
Virginia
2 posted 2003-06-13 09:19 AM


....I understand completely...and I can relate to this as well. I hope things get better.  *much love* -Jessica
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