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Ricky
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since 2001-02-25
Posts 28
West Virginia, USA

0 posted 2002-10-30 11:10 PM


Every morning I wake up
I look over and see her there
Too bad it's only a picture
But it reminds me of the times we share

You live so far away from me
But the distance doesn't matter
I haven't felt this way in so long
We have something that just can't shatter

I get scared sometimes and I'm sorry
You treat me so good and you say I deserve it
I've just never felt quite this way before
In return, I write this for you even though I'm no poet

You make me smile when I am down
You make the bad days turn good
If there is anything you'd like me to do
You just say, and do it I would

You are the love of me life
I know we can make this last
I'm sorry for anything I've done
Anything in the past

I love you with all of my hurt
I love you all these is to love about you
I feel so special when we're together
And I know you love me too.

That was written about/for my girlfriend. We've been together a short while and I know this is a good thing. She means a lot to me.

Also, it's been a while since I've been on here. Been very busy.


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vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
1 posted 2002-10-31 04:11 AM



Ricky~
Welcome back.  It's good to see you again.
This is a beautifully written and heartfelt piece.
You've expressed your feelings for your girlfriend very well.
Such a sweet and loving gift for her,
and I have no doubt that she will love it.
I enjoyed the read and hope to see lots more from you.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Tamma
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV
2 posted 2002-10-31 08:55 AM


Ricky ~

Hey babe! It sure has been awhile since you've posted, and I've been waiting for you to post again. This was real sweet, hun. I'm sure she'll love it. You have a special way about you...It must be those eyes... 'cause you can always win over someones heart. LoL...

~ Tamma

Have you ever heard that "No shirt, No shoes" rule? My question is...Why doesn't that rule include pants?

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