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StellarChica
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since 2002-07-06
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floating down a river...

0 posted 2002-10-30 07:10 PM




I'm so confused,
You say "love ya",
In such an offhanded way,
And I can't be sure,
Of anything.
You say you don't regret,
Meeting me,
But I regret,
Meeting you...sometimes.


Just a quick vent.

*~erin~*

"They say you need to pray if you wanna go to heaven. They never tell you what to say when your whole life has gone to hell."-Brand New

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Riley
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in the pouring rain
1 posted 2002-10-30 07:32 PM


Hey

Its a good vent, I think, actually

I'm so confused,
You say "love ya",
In such an offhanded way,
And I can't be sure,
Of anything.

I like the "love ya" part, its really ties in with the next line and the offhanded thing.

You say you don't regret,
Meeting me,
But I regret,
Meeting you...sometimes.

Isn't that true....I regret it 24/7 with some people.....


Good poem....or vent....yea....


Ri

~*I'm not gonna say I'm gorgeous, that for you to decide, if you really wanna know me, see the world through my eyes*~

HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 2001-08-17
Posts 495
LI, New York
2 posted 2002-10-30 08:17 PM


It really is a nice little poem, and so many people feel the same way as you.  We all regret meeting some people some times.  God knows life would be easier without them, but then I wouldn't have all my little poems to share, and I think alot of others are the same way.  Keep on writin'!

After Love comes Pain, then Love, Then Pain, then Love, then Pain..... does anyone else see a pattern here?  Oh well, can't say it's not worth it.

anawnda
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since 2002-07-26
Posts 113

3 posted 2002-10-31 05:40 AM


i know its cliche but i totally relate to this poem, good work!!!!
cherish
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since 2001-03-25
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swimming in fairy floss...........
4 posted 2002-11-01 12:14 PM


I quite enjoyed this one...been through it too..."love ya" is usually just words to me..but  what about the full "i love you" stuff? what happens when that is said in an offhandish way? MEGA confusion that's what

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