Flirting with the Flowers (for lack of a better title)

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Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2002-10-30 09:29 AM

LoL! Y’all know me, there always has to be an ol’ Chevy somewhere when I write. Yay! My poetry is coming back to me! I'm so happy

Hair done, Make-up just right
A long, pink, flowing dress
Flirting with the flowers
Beneath my bare feet

An ol’ Chevy pulls up
And I run into his arms
A tingle down my spine
As he whispers in my ear

He’s got something planned
An evening just for two
Dinner ~ then to his house
To be by ourselves

Cuddling on the couch
Watching a movie
With a kiss on my cheek
He gets up to get something

He comes back into view
Hands behind his back
Three roses in a vase
Along with a ring

He drops to his knee
“I love you girl ~
Will you marry me”
And he kisses my lips

Looking into his eyes
A beautiful baby blue
A smile graces my lips
As I give him my answer . . .

“I love you, too, Jeff
Of course, I’ll marry you”
As he looks into my green eyes
And takes me into his arms

Hair done, Make-up just right
A long, white, flowing dress
Flirting with the flowers
Beneath my bare feet

Sometymes, as close as you can get still isn’t close enough.

Have you ever heard that "No shirt, No shoes" rule? My question is...Why doesn't that rule include pants?

[This message has been edited by Tamma (10-30-2002 09:35 AM).]

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

1 posted 2002-10-30 01:31 PM

Very sweet. Congratulations on the engagement.

Oh, and I happen to like the title. Don't fear lack of a better one.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

2 posted 2002-10-30 03:06 PM

I agree with Local Parasite on the title. I liked this, and congratulations on the engagement! I hope all goes well for you and your fiance!

--Beth

Howl at the stars, whisper when you're sleeping, I'll be there to hold you, I'll be there to stop the chills and all the weeping.

Ricky
Junior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 28
West Virginia, USA

3 posted 2002-10-30 05:07 PM

Congradulations. One thing! If he treats you wrong one time.. ONE TIME! I will find people to take care of him lol. Congradulations sweetheart, I hope for the best.

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

4 posted 2002-10-30 05:10 PM

AWWW thanx Ricky! That meant the world to me

*hugz*

Have you ever heard that "No shirt, No shoes" rule? My question is...Why doesn't that rule include pants?

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2002-11-05 02:13 PM

Congratulations, Tamma!
I'm glad to see that things are going so well for you.
This is such a sweet poem, I couldn't help but smile.
Keep them coming and I'll keep reading.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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