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foreverwithyou
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0 posted 2002-10-29 08:05 PM



They told me to
So I did
They dared me to
So I did
All to fit in
All to be popular
But they didn't tell me there'd be a price to pay

© Copyright 2002 Cathy - All Rights Reserved
foreverwithyou
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1 posted 2002-10-29 08:12 PM


sry if i dissapointed anyone with this one (which i polly did )but  thats okay
devinechild22
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2 posted 2002-10-29 08:27 PM


Good one. Is this bout a geek egging a house? LOL. Just kiddin.
             *Allison*

HopelessRomanticGuy
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3 posted 2002-10-29 08:39 PM


You didn't dissapoint anyone, I sometimes get people to beg me to keep my poems short and to the point (I tend to ramble...) lol.  This was a very nice poem.

After Love comes Pain, then Love, Then Pain, then Love, then Pain..... does anyone else see a pattern here?  Oh well, can't say it's not worth it.

Local Parasite
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4 posted 2002-10-30 01:01 PM


Just use your head next time.  Everything is a learning experience, especially when there's a price to pay.  

Maybe you just need some new friends.  

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

foreverwithyou
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5 posted 2002-10-30 06:25 PM


na this isnt about my friends LP thank you though but this was about things that i have seen happen and thanx to the rest of you for your replys!
PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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6 posted 2002-11-02 10:56 PM


Allison, cathy. let me tell you a story..
so I'm a geek, right?
And some guy that the three of us know.. got me high... and i egged this house, and went to bed in the lawn.. and Frankie PeatersPuff, being the gentleman he is, left me there... So i woke up.. on my front lawn.. to an egged house- and until Frankie just called me now- i had thought it was him... but now i know it was me...
okay, you two- dont let ur friends get you high!!!

Juss jokin man, i don't do that.. on Halloween, Kalib and his gay pithead friend tried to get me to smoke a joint adn i said no! power to me!

right.. good job cath.
(sorry about rablming and stuff)

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