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foreverwithyou
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since 2002-10-20
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0 posted 2002-10-28 05:28 PM



I was sorta friends with her.
You were more than that.
I saw the way you danced with her
Saw the way you sat.
She sat beside you
Your arm around her waist.
And in her mouth
Your kisses she could taste.
You didn't know I liked you.
You were just a "good ol' friend".
Still I didn't want that friendship to have to come to an end.
But you broke my heart.
That's all there is to say.
You broke my heart.
Never again will I feel the same way.

© Copyright 2002 Cathy - All Rights Reserved
PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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since 2002-07-02
Posts 439
I am everywhere
1 posted 2002-10-28 05:32 PM


Sad write... :'(
It sucks to watch that stuff...
a lot.
I don't know what to say, man...
I liked it, tho...
a lot.

( )

"i told you i'd never say goodbye . now i'm slipping on the tears you made me cry but that's what i get"

dinky
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since 2002-10-19
Posts 258

2 posted 2002-10-28 05:41 PM


hey,
liked this one
gonna keep this reply short cuz i tend to write a book(lol)
and it aint even bout the poem
so
good write
~sam~

foreverwithyou
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since 2002-10-20
Posts 204
Wonderland
3 posted 2002-10-28 05:58 PM


thankz guyz you r the lucky two to be the first to reply j/j thankz tho and yes sara this is "bean stalk"
devinechild22
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since 2002-08-28
Posts 571

4 posted 2002-10-28 09:27 PM


Good one.I am sad right now. I dont know why.Anyway.........
          *Allison*

cherish
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since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........
5 posted 2002-10-28 09:53 PM


I agree with the person who said that this was sad. Nicely written though...thanks for sharing

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