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SailorFirebird
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since 2002-10-21
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15 Miles North of NoWhere

0 posted 2002-10-28 01:51 PM


Read this one line at a time because if you just read it straight thru, it makes no sense. It doesn't anyways, so...yeah.

I will not take hope from you
I'll never put thee to doubt
enter this love of his
denying hands
better at that
her old father leaves her
and has run off
thy beauty has proved me wrong, yet again
please
for my dream in thee leaves
eyes that decieve
the sea is in the mind
question me
thy honour is like my grace
i have none
be you lovely
be you lonely
yet i must only be wrong'd
tis enough
but them that drown in that sea (of emotions)
be the devil secretly
o my abuses
Cassandra in all
yet in nothing
yea, Im still a child
they do not see it
it frightens me so
you'd best be off soon
so little time
just
so little
sit in my mind and dream
all the crazy things you'll see
you won't want me
i am gone
yet here
i am crazy
yet sane
(in some strange way)
and they keep talking to me
like im important
she sheds tears for every second she loves
(that is all the time)
no one is willing to talk
she is
no one will listen
she does
they only pay half attention
blasts of friendship i hope to earn
passion is with thee
i love thee
i only hope
he loves me in return
sleep is calling
i am not home
my heart is weeping
again
his grace is fantastic
i have none
i shall not take your hope

I am Sailor Firebird! Defender of...ummm, STUFF! Behold my clarinet, vito, and the wrath of a squeeky reed!

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Local Parasite
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Transylconia, Winnipeg
1 posted 2002-10-28 01:57 PM


This is nuts, Firebird... looks like you had fun tossing it together, though.

Enjoyed reading it.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

foreverwithyou
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since 2002-10-20
Posts 204
Wonderland
2 posted 2002-10-28 06:07 PM


hey I don't think I really understood this poem but if I did I probley understood it in my own way :-D but anyway I enjoyed reading it


                

Alone Afraid n' Away
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since 2002-10-28
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3 posted 2002-10-28 06:15 PM


Hey um i dont think i really got ur poem but keep it up i still enjoyed reading it!


cherish
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since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........
4 posted 2002-10-28 10:11 PM


haha...Cassie, I've got to admit you lost me somewhere in that rant- nice read though

Are you scared?                        BOO! Are you now?

SailorFirebird
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since 2002-10-21
Posts 16
15 Miles North of NoWhere
5 posted 2002-10-29 07:40 PM


thanks for all of the comments.  i really appriciate them.  but, this is exactly what the title suggests it is...Random Thoughts at Midnite.  i happened to awake and had all these thoughts and so i just wrote them down and well, the rest is some what history.  ha, ha.  thanks again!

I am Sailor Firebird! Defender of...ummm, STUFF! Behold my clarinet, vito, and the wrath of a squeeky reed!

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