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foreverwithyou
Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 204
Wonderland

0 posted 2002-10-27 08:55 PM

We were together
Now we're not
Guess I didn't love you a whole lot
Cause now I don't think about you
I'm with someone new
You're out of my heart
Time for a new start
You go with her and I'll go with him
And maybe someday we'll meet up again
But even then I'd still hate you
All because of that girl
That girl that ruined it all
Now when I see you walking down the hall
I don't high-five you say "what up?" or I love you
I just look at you and you look at me

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

1 posted 2002-10-27 09:21 PM

Cathy,
I really liked this one. It had a lot of feeling in it. That is what poetry is good 4. Lettin off some steam. LOL.
*Allison*

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

2 posted 2002-10-27 09:25 PM

I liked it, I don't read rhyme to much anymore...but i like this!

Ri

~*I'm not gonna say I'm gorgeous, that for you to decide, if you really wanna know me, see the world through my eyes*~

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

3 posted 2002-10-27 10:27 PM

hey i really liked this one,
i really like readin ur poems they r kind of sad, but they r really good
keep writin
~sam~

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

4 posted 2002-10-28 04:48 PM

Hmmm... I've been here before...It seems like a hundred tymes... But, each tyme I gained strength, and you will, too. I promise. Someone told me that after my first heartbreak, and I thought they were kidding, but in my (nearly) 20 years, I've discovered that she was right.

~ Tamma

Have you ever heard that "No shirt, No shoes" rule? My question is...Why doesn't that rule include pants?

Kaytay0615@cs.com
New Member

since 2002-10-27

Posts 2
Indiana, USA

5 posted 2002-10-28 06:11 PM

Cathy............... That was really good keep it up! I figured it out!!

~kATE~

Alone Afraid n' Away
Junior Member

since 2002-10-28

Posts 19

6 posted 2002-10-28 06:13 PM

It was good sry bout the previous reply but now ive got it figured out

~Katie~

foreverwithyou
Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 204
Wonderland

7 posted 2002-10-28 06:24 PM

i wasn't sure if i should have posted this one or not but i'm glad that u all liked it thankz guyz:-D

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

8 posted 2002-10-28 10:21 PM

All those beatin' hearts

it's kinda scary having them all pulse at you like that...

Ahh...I think the guy's still on your mind- if you wrote that about him

....Ok, being silly...enjoyed the poem, thanks for sharing!

Are you scared? BOO! Are you now?

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

9 posted 2002-11-02 10:59 PM

aw... i'm kinda saddish now..
This goes in my PL (private library) but i feel like crying.. is this about peppermints? and even if it is- peppersmints doesnt go to skool (wit us.. or at all, lol i donno)
yea.. good write.
yea.. sad write.
stay clean man.

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

10 posted 2002-11-02 11:01 PM

i love the way you rhyme, ya baby, ya!!!

lol, i'm fine

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