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Betrayal |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
With love like your's, I don't want to see hate. Between me and him, there should be no debate. What do you see in him? He does nothing but hurt you, AND YOU LET HIM! He's got you so whipped, he's overpowered your mind. You just can't see past him, it's like you've gone blind. There's not one damn thing, that I could ever like about him, AND YOU KNOW IT! Are my feelings not important? Does my opinion not matter? One day you will see, he will make your heart shatter. And all I will say, is this simple- I TOLD YOU SO! You can close your eyes to things you dont want to see,but u cant close your heart to things you dont want to feel. |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Wow, nice work here Stace... you actually put a consistent format to a scream-your-head-off poem. I would have never expected that. The caps are very effective every other line. I like how you worked them into your format. Nice work Stace. Stace. Stace. See? I'm not that bad with names. Parasite Learn to place poetry before people |
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