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Will It Ever Change??
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
"Will it ever change" (10/23/02) © 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved Verse 1 I feel lonely, I feel useless, I feel ashamed, But can't...confess. I feel confused, I feel haunted, I feel broken, But not...wanted. Chorus Will it ever change? I don't know! Don't make it stay the same. Cause I can't live this way. Will it ever change? Verse 2 I feel so lost, I feel so old, I feel so hurt, And it's...so cold. I feel longing, I feel empty, I feel afraid, And I...can't breathe. Chorus Bridge Please tell me it's over That I can rest, Look over my shoulder Wihout, making a mess. Chorus (3x) |
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NSnaomian Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232In my troll closet I be |
I liked that a lot. I love reading song lyrics and trying to hear the tune it goes by. Amazing, great job! Hooray! Laura~ Real friends are those who, when you feel you've made a fool of yourself, don't feel you've done a permanent job. |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
This is really good. Kind of a departure from your usual subject matter, which I think is nice for a change...  Great work on this one, Brian. I imagine these words going with a really eerie, mellow melody... hehe... just too bad I can't hear the song for myself. Parasite Learn to place poetry before people |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You wrote this one nicely man. I liked this one a LOT. One of my favs.  This post has been brought to you by the 'Totally Awesome Society of Puerto Rican Egotistical Sexy Men'. |
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