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Teen Poetry #6

i need a poem

johncanica
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since 2002-10-21

Posts 2

0 posted 2002-10-21 03:08 PM

i need some1 who is good to write me a poem ive been friends withthis girl sabrina for 11 years and weve been really close friends 4 about 2 yrs and now i like her alot but she dosent really like me back and i wanted to give her a poem to explaing this she knows and like her and stuff but i would like a poem that represents whats going on any1 think they can write me one please???

Local Parasite

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since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

1 posted 2002-10-21 03:51 PM

Hi John, and welcome to Passions in Poetry.

Because the Teen Poetry forum is supposed to be intended for only posts that actually are poetry, I'm going to transfer your post into a discussion forum, where I believe it will get a better response.

And on the topic of this poem you would like, I understand that you are probably not very confident about the quality of your own poetry, but have you considered asking someone for guidance on a poem that you've written, perhaps? Instead of getting someone to flat-out write the poem for you, you could probably post a poem in any of our forums (especially Critical Analysis), and expect people to really help you in giving it a more professional presentation.

I wish you the best of luck with this situation, and welcome to Passions in Poetry! I really hope you give your own poetry a chance and try to learn as much as you can here.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

vlraynes
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2 posted 2002-10-21 05:27 PM

johncanica~
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