The Psycho? (Riley, I challenge thee! Hehehe!)

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EleanorMoonbaby
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since 2002-09-02

Posts 202
England, UK

0 posted 2002-10-19 05:21 PM

I hate this school.
Swarming with people
With ant mentality.

I like my own company.
Sat by myself, in my corner
Of the library

Dressed in black.

My hair hangs in my face
Like curtains.
It keeps out their blank faces.

The other day
Some stupid eleven-year-old yelled
"Psycho!" at me. Moron.

I could see his little mind working;
He wanted to have an effect.
Compared to him?

I think I'm pretty sane.

"Last night, I had a dream that I went to the doctors, and she gave me eight minutes to live. I'd spent thirty minutes in the [edited by moderator] waiting room"- S

[This message has been edited by quietlydying (10-20-2002 07:22 PM).]

Local Parasite

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since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

1 posted 2002-10-19 05:26 PM

haha... nice... but I don't see what it has to do with Riley...

You're confusing everyone, girl.

I liked "Moron." Hehehe...

Keep on posting stuff like this, El... I'm loving what you have to offer.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

EleanorMoonbaby
Member

since 2002-09-02

Posts 202
England, UK

2 posted 2002-10-19 05:29 PM

Me and Riley were chatting on MSN the other night and I challenged her to a nice friendly duel.... writing a poem about a psycho! Everyone else can join in too, this should be quite interesting! Oh and thankies.... I didn't think this was one of my better efforts, but hey, a poem's a poem!
Ellie

"Last night, I had a dream that I went to the doctors, and she gave me eight minutes to live. I'd spent thirty minutes in the [edited by moderator] waiting room"- S

[This message has been edited by quietlydying (10-20-2002 07:22 PM).]

Riley

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since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

3 posted 2002-10-19 09:49 PM

I shall meet your challenge Ellie, soon enough.......I shall work it on right now.....my pshyco ( sp? ) analaysis!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Riley

~* Love humiliates you, hatered cradles you-White Olender *~

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2002-10-20 10:42 PM

I liked this one. Just don't become one of those older adults that shuns society in order to compensate for society shunning them when they were younger. I mean, it's not worth it.
You know yer cool, good poem.