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vlraynes
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0 posted 2002-10-18 02:50 AM



~*Bridled Passion*~

Horses are pretty
I like them a lot
But men are better
And some are real hot

~vlraynes


Okay, Rhonda...there ya go. LOL.

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

© Copyright 2002 Vicky L. Raynes - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-18 02:53 AM


*give you the high five* Woohoo! I think you're needing to write humor Vicky... I think you'll be able to kick your muse better with humore

You are so my hero!

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2 posted 2002-10-18 11:13 AM


Probably the best I've read from you, Vicky... so much depth...

Keep up the great work.  

Parasite

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Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

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3 posted 2002-10-18 07:41 PM


hot men?

why thank you

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4 posted 2002-10-19 01:16 AM


*jaw drops* I've never...quite---seen...anything...like, this (?)

E muja oui, "Hyweyr". Pavune E lyh raym ouin byeh, E ryja du kad ujan so ufh...

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5 posted 2002-10-19 01:23 AM


hahaha alex.  you're amusing.

but not quite as amusing as this poem.

this was...  interesting.

quite.

::grins::

/jen/

at first i wondered why white oleander was in the six dollar bargain bin.

and then i read it.

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6 posted 2002-10-19 02:38 AM


*chuckles*


~Titus

"My imaginary friend thinks you have serious mental problems."

(2002 Copyright)

vlraynes
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7 posted 2002-10-19 02:04 PM



Rhonda...I still can't believe you suckered
me into posting this! LOL!  You're good!
Now, I'll have to post a 'real' poem in here
so that LP doesn't think this is the best he's
seen from me..lol.

LP...thanks SO MUCH for the encouraging
words.  I do my best.

Dopey...how'd you know it was about you? lol.
You're SUCH a humble guy.

Alex...that's...probably...a...good...thing.

Jen...'interesting', huh?  LOL
What's interesting is that I actually let Rhonda
sucker me into posting it!  LOL!
Glad it gave you a laugh.

*wonders why Ti is chuckling at one of her
most serious poetic endeavors*

Thank you all for reading.
It's ALL Rhonda's fault!  LOL.
Hugs to you all,
~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (10-19-2002 02:06 PM).]

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8 posted 2002-10-27 10:40 PM


*teehee*.....

didnt i read that on a bathroom wall in highschool?  

very funny vick!

thanks for the chuckle..needed that!!

hugs, g

"dont cry because its over, smile because it happened...!"  -unknown

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