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StellarChica
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0 posted 2002-10-16 11:36 PM



No way,
This is not a love poem,
Not at all.
But let's say,
Just by coincidence,
I imply,
Within these lines,
((Keep in mind this is all hypothetical.))
That,
Maybe,
Just maybe,
I love you.
((See? Not a love poem at all.))


*~erin~*


"They're only words, they don't hurt."-Ben Kweller

[This message has been edited by StellarChica (10-16-2002 11:42 PM).]

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clumsy
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1 posted 2002-10-16 11:41 PM


lol. aaaww. this was sweet.
clumsy
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2 posted 2002-10-16 11:41 PM


lol. aaaww. this was sweet. love poems are a good thing.. don't be in denial!
Local Parasite
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3 posted 2002-10-16 11:46 PM


this is not a reply... not a reply... not even if I say, this was a cool poem... which it was...

But I'd never say that, 'cause this is not a reply... nope...

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4 posted 2002-10-17 04:37 AM


How witty of Local P, eh?

Anyhow, I thought the poem was definitely cute, real cute.
I liked it a lot.

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5 posted 2002-10-17 08:32 AM


Awwww. Now that was cute.

Jenn

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6 posted 2002-10-17 08:53 AM


not only was that incredibly cute but it was also a pretty unique twist on the ol' tried and tested love poem. Good stuff
vlraynes
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7 posted 2002-10-21 11:58 PM



StellarChica~
This is very creative and I like it much.
Definately not the average love poem.
Great job on this.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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8 posted 2002-10-22 09:11 AM


Very clever I really enjoyed reading this poem

Andrew

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