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Imajica
Junior Member

since 2002-09-16

Posts 14
NM, USA

0 posted 2002-10-14 09:03 PM

Just wanted to share this, if you go back to the Topics and read the names of the poems in order, you produce a sort of poem...

"I turn around
with a empty head
dead in the archives
dead in the web of broken hearts"

Its kind of nonsense though.
I'm just impressed...

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

1 posted 2002-10-14 11:44 PM

Hah, that's cool...

Don't you love it when stuff like that happens?

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

2 posted 2002-10-15 07:06 AM

A very interesting use of titles, very original, thanks for sharing

Andrew

quietlydying

Senior Member

since 2001-06-10

Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz

3 posted 2002-10-15 11:16 PM

that's just plain awesome.

and lookie this!! i'm in it!!

heh.

nice observation...

kudos.

/jen/

at first i wondered why white oleander was in the six dollar bargain bin.

and then i read it.

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

4 posted 2002-10-16 12:48 PM

Ahahahahaa....Fantastic Teresa..

How about this one:

Spoon it

I am For
My Reality
Mistaken hopes

Lookie this
A burden Lifted
With My blessings (?)

Same street walking
Scars
My world is viewed through dreamers eyes
Dead in the web of hearts
And this is me without you.

It's brilliant how they work out.

Are you scared? BOO! Are you now?

quietlydying

Senior Member

since 2001-06-10

Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz

5 posted 2002-10-16 12:50 PM

i love this game.

it's quite fun.

/jen/

at first i wondered why white oleander was in the six dollar bargain bin.

and then i read it.

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2002-10-16 06:26 PM

I rule
haha

nicely done

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

7 posted 2002-10-16 08:11 PM

How about this one about someone choking down some exotic food...

I don't cry easily.

A part of robin
I tried
ineveraskedyoutobleed

Spoon it. (the fun is always in the finding out)

..

A burden lifted!

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

8 posted 2002-10-16 08:22 PM

How cool, how it all pulls together NEAT!!
LOL I am hyper
Riley

~* Love humiliates you, hatered cradles you-White Olender *~

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

9 posted 2002-10-16 10:01 PM

I really liked this, im gonna back and read the others...soon...

Regina

clumsy
Member

since 2002-10-10

Posts 106
canada.

10 posted 2002-10-16 11:26 PM

whoop! that's awesome!

clumsy
Member

since 2002-10-10

Posts 106
canada.

11 posted 2002-10-16 11:39 PM

okay i'm giong to try this now :

             i tried
            the death of summer | the silence is
               here to stay
                    when i'm with you.
xoxo,
||.jessica.||

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