14.5 hours of sleep = this poem

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PeaceInEverything
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since 2002-10-06

Posts 31
Ohio, United States

0 posted 2002-10-13 05:24 PM

Ok I went to bed at 7pm and got up at 9:30am. I am very full of energy. VERY VERY FULL FULL!!! I went to WalMart (Supporting big business bad but no alternative) and bought some stuff. Here is my poem ! WHEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

Good and Plenty
-----------------
Only Taste Matters
Imitation of life
Some Pink some White
Some Short Some Long
Some Wide Some Thin
All the same
On the Inside
Where all the taste is

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2002-10-13 07:15 PM

This was pretty cool. Especially the "wheeee" part

The poem sort of made me think of some deeper messages.....

1) We're all the same, we have souls on the inside. Love humanity just like you love candy

2) Some spin off poem about conformity

I don't know.....I'm sure you wrote it just about good and plety's haha, but hey....

well done..

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Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

2 posted 2002-10-14 09:16 AM

A great read, thank you for sharing

Andrew

Local Parasite

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since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

3 posted 2002-10-14 12:30 PM

I saw the humanity thing too... but I think you're a bit too full of energy to pack a poem with symbolism.

Great poem! WHEEEEE!

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

clumsy
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since 2002-10-10

Posts 106
canada.

4 posted 2002-10-14 12:36 PM

i didn't get this... but i liked it anyways. lol.

PeaceInEverything
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since 2002-10-06

Posts 31
Ohio, United States

5 posted 2002-10-14 01:04 PM

Ah Ha! I meant the symbolism! YAY, someone else got it! No one here at college got it, which could be really bad. Im happy now

Im glad there are lots of deep people on here because there seem to be an abundence of shallow thinkers here at college. Or at least most of the ones I have talked to

Thanks

Peace

[This message has been edited by PeaceInEverything (10-14-2002 07:01 PM).]

quietlydying

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since 2001-06-10

Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz

6 posted 2002-10-14 09:00 PM

oh, the more i sleep, the less energy i have.

but then again, my body just doesn't work properly.

sorry for my pointless blather, i'm having some seriously weird and scary neurological problems right now. again. bleh.

::shrugs::

/jen/

i just haven't been the same since that house fell on my sister.

[the closest thing i've found to heaven is sitting here talking to you.bif naked]

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