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PeaceInEverything
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since 2002-10-06
Posts 31
Ohio, United States

0 posted 2002-10-12 05:17 PM


Friends, but More?
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We are friends now,
but could we be more?
I don't want to ask,
and risk closing friendship's door.

New hope is on the horizon,
while the old torments from behind.
New hope is there for me,
if my courage I find.

Doubts born of past pain,
rear up and strike my speech.
Barriers erected through suffering,
are hard barriers to breech.

Are these thoughts of mine,
shared or mine alone?
One question to better life,
or have a friendship blown.

What would you say,
if I spoke my mind?
Around your words,
my heart will be twined.

© Copyright 2002 Chris Adams - All Rights Reserved
Local Parasite
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since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527
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1 posted 2002-10-12 05:25 PM


Your username reminds me of PoetryIsLife for some obvious reason.

This poem is cute.  I like the upbeat concepts like "friendship's door."  Gave me a smile.

Nice work.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

EleanorMoonbaby
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since 2002-09-02
Posts 202
England, UK
2 posted 2002-10-12 05:26 PM


Aaaahhhhh, know the feeling. Good luck, and don't mess up your friendship like I did. Sorry, feeling a bit sentimental. Seriously?
Best of luck, and great poem!
Ellie *)

"Last night, I had a dream that I went to the doctors, and she gave me eight minutes to live. I'd spent thirty minutes in the [edited by moderator] waiting room"- S

[This message has been edited by quietlydying (10-20-2002 07:37 PM).]

clumsy
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since 2002-10-10
Posts 106
canada.
3 posted 2002-10-12 05:59 PM


hope everything works out if you do tell her!
Dopey Dope
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4 posted 2002-10-12 06:24 PM


I enjoyed the poem. I have been there and I presume many of us have. This is one of the common happenings that occur throughout a teenagers lifetime. It's up to the individual to find out how to deal with it. I'd like to think that the best relationships start out as friends, so good luck with this one.

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