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devinechild22
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0 posted 2002-10-12 02:18 PM



Hate
Why do we live with so much hate?
Black,White,Asian,Gay,or Straight
Hate crimes committed every day
Learn to live and love
All of those listed above

© Copyright 2002 Allison Colgrove - All Rights Reserved
devinechild22
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1 posted 2002-10-12 02:26 PM


Last night I watched "Anatomy of A Hate Crime" about the Matthew Shepard murder.It was so sad and I was greatly disturbed. I have always been a strong believer in equal rights for all races and types of people.I am always greatly angered when people are unfair to others because of who they are. I think that people should be accepting. No matter what.
PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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2 posted 2002-10-12 02:41 PM


Yea I heard about that Shepard guy.. didn't that happen awhile back- a couple years?

Very true poem.

But I guess in a way, we all are unfair, in at least once part in out life.
We should all really learn to love, as your poem said.

Good job.

~Sara

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3 posted 2002-10-12 02:44 PM


I like this... you wrote it in the style of some kind of campaign poster, or a card, or something.  It's short but you use the rhyme just right to make it sound a tad lyrical.

It's catchy too.  Would make a great t-shirt or something.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

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4 posted 2002-10-12 03:44 PM


Very true. I agree with everything you say. Very good poem and keeping us aware.

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devinechild22
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5 posted 2002-10-27 08:08 PM


Wow sis! I really thing you did a great job! From your sis Chrissy
PS I hope to see more soon!

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