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devinechild22
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0 posted 2002-10-12 01:58 PM



Is love really true?
Or is true love a lie?

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1 posted 2002-10-12 02:40 PM


I dunno.  Tough call...

Everyone who's in a relationship, who replies in this thread, is going to say "oh yeah, love is really true because I AM IN LOVE!"

Trust me.  It's how it always goes.  

I propose that love is something that cannot really be defined as true... because the only way to know it is to experience it.  Plus, any number of things can be called love... my definition of love is true, but some think of it as a mystical force somehow...

Strange to consider, really.

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
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2 posted 2002-10-12 02:44 PM


True love is a lie-- for sure.

not to fill you with doubt.. but it seems that's all I'm good at anymore.

but maybe this will let your forget your worries...  

..or maybe not?

Good write, good write.

But what could I possibly say to cap those few words...
they are truly priceless.

EleanorMoonbaby
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3 posted 2002-10-12 03:05 PM


I think that love is all in the miind. Peopkle jsut need others to help quench theirr sexual appatitte or make thm feel needeed. or maybe im just saying this cuz i m a bit drunk and hacked off with my ex... anyhoo, nice poem. made me think. welll donne.
Ellie *)

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[This message has been edited by quietlydying (10-20-2002 07:38 PM).]

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4 posted 2002-10-12 03:43 PM


I will not answer because I don't think it was meant to be answered. The question, though, was a nice one. Well put.

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devinechild22
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5 posted 2002-10-27 08:09 PM


Godd job! from your sis Chrissy!
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