I also noticed the use of enjambments, it's done really well in this piece... and I do see why you didn't just draw one long one out, because you had multiple points to make and had to change your subject matter from time to time. You see, Zu is a bit of a devoted lunatic, and he loves to take one concept and push it throughout an entire poem.
He usually turns out something really good, though, so I shouldn't comment.
Nice work here, man.
Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.