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Kevin
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0 posted 2002-10-07 06:41 PM


Reality is the acknowledgement of ones limitations.
Depression is acceptance.

I'm on my feet, I'm on the floor, I'm good to go
All I need is just to hear a song I know

© Copyright 2002 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-10-07 07:54 PM


   kev- i loved this one. short and sweet. sweet....like u. lol
LCBS
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2 posted 2002-10-07 08:54 PM


hey kev, between this and your current away message I'm really worried...

Great job though...

~Lee

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3 posted 2002-10-07 11:43 PM


Hmm... I'm thinking that I disagree with the "depression is acceptance" part, as it was when I accepted my limitations that I was noticably freed from depression. It's different for everyone though I suppose. You okay?

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4 posted 2002-10-08 08:58 PM


Awww....this is short sweet and to the point......I agree with Skyfire up there, you okay???

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5 posted 2002-10-09 04:54 AM


I liked this very much and I have to agree with the sentiment of the poem actually, anyway well done Kevin!

Anya

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6 posted 2002-10-11 01:40 PM


I loved this, but completely disagree with it. Well done though, Kevin! I've always enjoyed your work.

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7 posted 2002-10-12 11:44 AM


Wrong, wrong, wrong....

Reality is what is percieved.  
Depression is a filter to perception, therefore depression dictates reality.

Acceptance is merely affirmation.

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

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8 posted 2002-10-12 12:10 PM


so quickly everyone does not agree with him, but depressions can differ...

What someone feels can be a million times different then what another feels, its still depression...its still painful...

~Lisa

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9 posted 2002-10-12 03:04 PM


Who are we to define?

I think Kevin wrote something that has its own truth value. The reason why I disagree with it is because it can change quite frequently depending on the situation and the individual's mind.

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