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AGENT SMITH
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since 2003-06-09
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illinois

0 posted 2003-06-09 02:37 AM



             FRIENDS

Friends can be very confusing,
as they most can be very amusing.
As you sit there and wonder
think of that person.
Is that person yor friend,
or is he just one big blunder?
You go out and do things together,
like its no big deal.
But then when you do something bad
you miss out on a meal.
Where do you think you are,
I am not in my car thinking about that person,
I am in my room grounded,
because of what my friend confounded.


            

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Chris-
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since 2003-06-09
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1 posted 2003-06-09 03:06 AM


the poem was pretty good but your name is agent smith why are you writing about friends in the form of poetry shouldn't you be trying to end the world or something
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