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Riley
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in the pouring rain

0 posted 2002-10-07 08:24 AM


touching your lips with the tip of my finger
blackned by chipping paint worn away by time
stabbing the back of a consicous dummy i call me
your red shoot eyes fly at me killing
you laugh cold heartedly flesh crawling with every step

a pawn in my goulish game simply shell binding
the impression made stays in the wood
you hurt me so bad yet it never show
for dummies can't have feelings can they
or so you say at least

a simple touch on your face
with my cold none felt finger
washes away all time and effort
for touch can't do much
except increase the want



~* Love humiliates you, hatered cradles you-White Olender *~

[This message has been edited by Riley (10-07-2002 07:13 PM).]

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quietlydying
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the wonderful land of oz
1 posted 2002-10-07 04:36 PM


maybe you should wait until you're finished before posting.

/jen/

i just haven't been the same since that house fell on my sister.

[the closest thing i've found to heaven is sitting here talking to you.bif naked]

eor
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blues & greys
2 posted 2002-10-07 06:23 PM


like to see the rest...eor
Riley
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3 posted 2002-10-07 06:57 PM


I write when I am in the new topic thing and I sometimes don't get finished and have no choice but to post until i get more time.....


Ri

~* Love humiliates you, hatered cradles you-White Olender *~

quietlydying
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4 posted 2002-10-08 04:08 PM


then try using microsoft word.

or a pen and paper.

don't write poetry just for the sake of posting.

/jen/

i just haven't been the same since that house fell on my sister.

[the closest thing i've found to heaven is sitting here talking to you.bif naked]

Chloey
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5 posted 2002-10-08 05:17 PM


i like it.............so far

                  *$*Chloey*$*

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