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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
finding nothing but wanting something ignoring everthing but seeing it all i don't care what happens but i want to be in control still dealing with the past but only looking at the future i can't talk to you but you can try to understand my babbling |
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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
Short and sweet.....loved it.....thats how i feel sometimes to.....sad isn't it....LOL Ri ~* Love humiliates you, hatered cradles you-White Olender *~ |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
The first 3 lines make perfect sense. I like the length, short poems are often "intriguing"..or something to that effect. Interesting email btw. Gamerboy?  Bel [This message has been edited by Isabel Galaxia (10-06-2002 10:44 PM).] |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Ooohhhh love the critique message...hmmmm... I like the way you did this; simple and well babbled Jenn Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving? |
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