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Isabel Galaxia
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0 posted 2002-10-05 05:28 PM


Splinters, broken pieces of a broken girl
The hollow hull, the skeleton where that once held up that girl
Living is a lie
Every night I dream about him
Every morning I lose him again
I never want to leave the bed
The smile is a disguise
The laughter is an act
Two years, nine months, twenty-four days of love torn from me
My boyfriend, my best friend, my love ripped from me in one moment
He needed space he needed to be sure he
He thought he made a mistake he thought he would come back he
He said he guesses he could say "life is good"
Nothing makes sense
NOTHING
All that matters
NOTHING
Confused without anger or hatred
Wanting answers I cannot yet find
Vowing to myself not to call
Scared of scaring him away
Promising myself to give him space
God give me patience, God give me strength, God fix it
God please
All that matters

NOTHING
nothing


This is really for/to/about CLBinLOVE, who probably won't read this.  I don't know what to do.  The first "He.." line was on Monday, the second Tuesday, the third today.
I don't know

[This message has been edited by Isabel Galaxia (10-07-2002 06:20 PM).]

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Local Parasite
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1 posted 2002-10-06 02:22 AM


Nice writing, Isabel... I haven't seen you in here for quite some time.

I really can feel this... you spoke to me with this one, I know exactly what you're communicating here.  I hope you're alright.

Keep your head high.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

Isabel Galaxia
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since 2000-06-18
Posts 733

2 posted 2002-10-07 06:22 PM


I haven't had much to write about lately, until now.
If I don't hold my head up I'll run into something.
lol
Thanks for replying!
Bel

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