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StellarChica
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0 posted 2002-10-04 11:22 PM



Ok, it's time for a silly poem. So here's one about the guy I am currently infatuated with..

Jason,
Oh Jason,
Why must you be so sexy?
Are you here to torture me?
Go ahead,
Play me like you do your guitar,
Just let me take this oh so far.
No way,
I'm not easy,
But when I see you I feel queazy.
Please oh please,
Let me at least touch you,
Perhaps just a high five or two.
Jason,
Oh Jason,
Seeing you just once a day,
Is enough for me to feel okay.
I beg of you,
Just look at me and smile,
It would make my life seem so worthwhile.
I don't care,
If it looks like I'm a stalker,
I wonder if you could be a smooth talker.
There are times,
When on you I just want to jump,
I don't care if you have no rump.
Jason,
Oh Jason,
Let's make sweet love all night long,
At this moment I don't care if it's wrong.


Hehe. Ok enough of my silliness.

*~erin~*

"You write the lie you want to be when your life looks like a book you wouldn't read."-Jets To Brazil

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Local Parasite
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1 posted 2002-10-05 01:56 AM


This is nutty... hehe... I think you should show this to the Tinman, see if he likes it.  Maybe he'll get enough of a laugh out of it to fulfill your wishes.     Even if he has no rump.

Nice work.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

anya
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2 posted 2002-10-05 09:00 AM


this made me laugh, thankyou, you captured the that feeling of infatuation alright, jeez I love that feeling lol, well anyway well done

Anya

StellarChica
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3 posted 2002-10-05 01:27 PM


Thanks guys. I think I just might show him this..Heh. That would be amusing.
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4 posted 2002-10-05 10:57 PM


my tinman's name is dylan.

oh dylan...

::sighs::

/jen/

i just haven't been the same since that house fell on my sister.

[the closest thing i've found to heaven is sitting here talking to you.bif naked]

devinechild22
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5 posted 2002-10-05 11:10 PM


This is funny..but true. i get what you are saying. my tinman is doug.....awww doug.........
StellarChica
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6 posted 2002-10-05 11:28 PM


Hehe. I call him the tinman because when his band played Somewhere Over The Rainbow he was the tinman and wore a tin foil shirt. That was a good time. Yes..Thanks for reading guys.

"You write the lie you want to be when your life looks like a book you wouldn't read."-Jets To Brazil

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