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Chloey Member
since 2002-09-29
Posts 74in a silver mustang convertible |
I feel everyone staring their eyes pierce my back it gives me shivers i know what there thinking they all think the same they think im weird im just different from them and they cant handle it they want me to be their clone so preppy and perky all day long i am a happy and fun person but im not a stereotype Im me and me alone *my first un-rhymed poem*  Revenge is sweet But paybacks a bitch [This message has been edited by Chloey (10-04-2002 07:36 AM).] |
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Chloey Member
since 2002-09-29
Posts 74in a silver mustang convertible |
ok i know yall wanted me to stop writing so come see it *$*Chloey*$* Revenge is sweet |
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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
Awesome...awesome right! GREAT JOB! Ri ~* Love humiliates you, hatered cradles you-White Olender *~ |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Hehe! You did rhyme, though. The first line of your last full stanza and the very last line of the poem rhyme. See, even when you try you can't escape it. Nice job. ~Suzy ~*~Born to Blossom and Bloom to Perish~*~ |
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Chloey Member
since 2002-09-29
Posts 74in a silver mustang convertible |
that doesnt count hahah oh well i tried!!! Revenge is sweet |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I like this... it's important that we pride ourselves on individuality, and not on what others wish we would make ourselves into. Great sentiments, Chloey.  Allan All images begin in mirrors and end inside our subconsious. ~Genesis P-Orridge, "Thee Reversal of Fate" [This message has been edited by Allan Riverwood (10-03-2002 11:22 PM).] |
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