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Baby_Angel123
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since 2001-10-12
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Unity, ME

0 posted 2002-10-03 04:41 PM



For Granted

Everyday,
people take life,
for granted.

They always expect,
they'll have another day,
to do what it is,
they want.

It never crosses their mind,
that they may not have another day,
that they wont ba able,
to do what it is they want.

It's rather sad,
how much we,
take life for granted.

When in fact,
we should be living,
it to it's fullest.


[This message has been edited by Baby_Angel123 (10-04-2002 08:00 PM).]

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Deep_Inside
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since 2002-02-14
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i can't stop hiding
1 posted 2002-10-03 05:54 PM


it's sad how true this poem is thanks for the read
HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 2001-08-17
Posts 495
LI, New York
2 posted 2002-10-03 07:51 PM


Y'know, come to think of it, most of us really do take each day for granted.... it is sad....

Great poem though.  I like it.

Seeya 'round.

'Rich

After Love comes Pain, then Love, Then Pain, then Love, then Pain..... does anyone else see a pattern here?  Oh well, can't say it's not worth it.

Local Parasite
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3 posted 2002-10-03 08:00 PM


Think you mean "for granted."  Unless you're trying to slang it up somehow.  

Indeed it can be bothersome that people don't take the time to really appreciate some aspects of life, and live it to its fullest.  Just a bit depressing at times.

Good work on the poem.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

Devils Angel 666
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since 2001-11-30
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CT, USA
4 posted 2002-10-06 06:24 PM


I HATE how true this is baby.  I hate it when people go too fast and hit peopleon bikes when they are riding in the car nad when the kid on the bike said "slow down guys, this could be dangerous.  Let me go first." - The last words of my Dear friend Marty Wilson Jr. 4-17-86 10-01-02 12:27
R.I.P.

Riley
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in the pouring rain
5 posted 2002-10-06 09:15 PM


I am really embarrased to say this is true for me.....I am so weird....
Ri

~* Love humiliates you, hatered cradles you-White Olender *~

Genuine_Canadian_Man
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since 2002-10-07
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Timmins, Ontario, Canada
6 posted 2002-10-07 07:16 PM


It's unbeleivable how true and real this greatly written poem is!

Keep Up the good work and good luck in al your future writting.

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