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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
D r i f t e d, away from you. Once, we were close, now we're so far. Wanting to be nearer, knowing its impossible. Whats been broken, cannot be fixed now. I'm so sorry, I wasn't a better love. M I S t a k e n. You can close your eyes to things you dont want to see,but u cant close your heart to things you dont want to feel. [This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (10-02-2002 08:40 AM).] |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
So you're saying, you've lost someone... and you feel somehow responsible for it? Don't worry about it, kid... there's lots of other fish in the sea. And seeing as how you're "lost at sea," go fishin'.  Parasite Learn to place poetry before people |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
lol thanks, it was actually a friendship that went sour instead of a love/relationship, but he still meant a great deal 2 me and i'm sorry i lost him the way that i did...i do blame myself 4 it cuz all the evidence points 2 me...o well...  You can close your eyes to things you dont want to see,but u cant close your heart to things you dont want to feel. |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
A very good write, the title caught my attention and I like the idea of friends drfiting apart like being lost at sea, very cool, anyway thanks for sharing  Andrew |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
thanks Zu, i'm glad u liked it You can close your eyes to things you dont want to see,but u cant close your heart to things you dont want to feel. |
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