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Misplaced Outkast
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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain 
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if it is my fault that they mistake all my oddness out of the ordinary little habits tossled hair up in a tiny tail for coolness i apologize greatly my intent was not as so for i am not what i seem at all a misplaced outkast from the lonely little world in which i place myself i am sorry for everything i caused it wasn't my fault i didn't try to fit in much wanted to for that matter all i wanted was to write and learn for all the knowlege i can recieve but i fit in anyway to all my friends i don't know how it happened can't i have a word in this on how i was such a loser last year and now some how magically i am the center of your world explain to me this wonder i do not understand all i know is that now i am the sweet little girl from next door you are taking my heart and running away from me and hurting it and i can't figure out why i'm not so innocent anymore yet still i am that odd one with which you cannot see makes it all the better for you know the true poet my sweet watchful eyes everything is inside and you now accept me for me for that i thank you ** Little note: To all my friends here at pip....you can't see me, I am such a true dork * bows * but you accept me anywayz !!!  Thanks! ( now I actually have friends? Write this down LOL had to say that )** ~* Love humiliates you, hatered cradles you-White Olender *~ [This message has been edited by Riley (10-01-2002 05:20 PM).] |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Aww, of course we accept you!  I'm sure if you could see what all of us look like in our everyday lives, you'd feel a lot better about it, too.  I like this poem, but spelling Outcast with a K makes me think of that rather unpleasant rap group. Ughh... rap music...  I like the little contradictions that lace this poem, giving it a bit more of a down-to-earth, from-the-source feel... like how you end one stanza with "I am sorry for everything I caused," and then follow immediately with the contradiction, "it wasn't my fault." This is different from your other works. Also, it ends on a rather optimistic note. I like that. Nice work, Miss Riley. Parasite Learn to place poetry before people |
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gymnast Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 80Scotland. |
awesome poem-i like it a lot! everyone needs to be accepted at some point and im glad that you are! this is the first poem of yours ive read-and i hope i will read many more! ||Amanda|| |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Awww very nice poem. We accept anyone who so willingly places their heart and soul up for our eyes to read. Well done  This post has been brought to you by the 'Totally Awesome Society of Puerto Rican Egotistical Sexy Men'. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Awwwww, I know this feeling well. Why wouldn't we accept you? We're all dorks in real life too! Thank YOU for accepting US You are so my hero! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Riley~ We're a family here, and you're an important member of that family. You are accepted and loved here. Hugs,  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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SuperSonic Junior Member
since 2002-10-17
Posts 16Northern Ireland |
*sigh* I know the feeling all too well. I've seen what cool is these days, and I prefer being a 'freak' than be one of those faceless two-diemensional egomaniacs. I like this poem a lot. You should be proud of who you are, we're all different in our own ways, and yet we're all the same, united in our love of poetry. Good work! |
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