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Teen Poetry #6

If you were my friend

Chloey
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since 2002-09-29

Posts 74
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0 posted 2002-09-29 03:12 PM

If you were my friend
You wouldn't be so mean
Every time I talk
You put up a screen

If you were my friend
You wouldn't use me
Every time I help
You abuse* me

So now Im not ur friend
Now Im letting you know
We are no longer aquaintinces
Don't put on this show

*Abuse me means like abuse my help*

ShadyMakaveli
Member

since 2002-08-21

Posts 128

1 posted 2002-09-29 09:49 PM

i really liked this piece, cause i feel the same way a lot of the times and i think many others can relate to this, good work.

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