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anawnda
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since 2002-07-26
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0 posted 2002-09-29 08:50 AM



If I could tear out these chains
that bind me.
then I wont be here again,
Broken-winged and confused.

If I could break this cycle;
avoid the all-consuming flame.

It wont be you the next time.
but it would still be the same.

same story,
different face.
same heart,
fresh pain...
***


here i go again, another sad love story,i love you...... why do you love her????????


* you can hurt me...with your bare hands,or
you can hurt me using the sharp edge of what you said.....* jewel kilcher

[This message has been edited by anawnda (09-30-2002 04:13 AM).]

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anawnda
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1 posted 2002-09-29 08:58 AM


ey, I havent posted for a long time. I back!!!! anyway a lot has happened already. why am i so stupid????? i just plunge back into the same thing over and over and i never learn. this is totally unrelate4d but i almost got jailed. well im a minor but there's this fire alarm scandal thingy....
hands off on fire alarms people!!!!!

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2 posted 2002-09-29 05:39 PM


i really like the emotion in this piece.  very strong.

maybe you should proofread before posting.

just a thought.

/jen/

so foul and fair a day i have not seen.  - macbeth act 1, scene 3

anawnda
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3 posted 2002-09-30 12:59 PM


I cant seem to edit it already!!!! I just wrote it imprompu and I could see my errors in it now.

Unrequited Love   (9/29/02)

If I could tear out these chains
That bind me.
Then I wont be here again,
Broken winged and confused.

If I could break this cycle;
Avoid the all-consuming flame.

It wont be you the next time.
But it would still be the same.

Same story,
Different face.
Same heart,
Fresh pain.........
***

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