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devinechild22
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0 posted 2002-09-26 05:37 PM


                    tears

dripping down to the floor
splash on the tile
tears
pure and clear
the cause so dirty
evil cruel and rude
tears
lies deciet and pain
cause tears
many tears have i cried
enough to flood the earth
tears
i only wish
these tears would dry away
i wish that u would wipe them away
insted of making them flow
tears


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1 posted 2002-09-26 05:56 PM


I like the ideas you have expressed here about tears, that we can find them in happiness and sorrow, in pain and in love. Thank you for sharing this with us I really enjoyed the read

Andrew

If your reading this signature I have replied to your poem, please repay the compliment :)
          

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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2 posted 2002-09-26 07:01 PM


Andrew.. like Andy.. like---
Ah, sorry, Allison, I'm spacin out.

Mike... It's so sad, man.
Things will get better, the pain goes away.
(as SGT. Whateverhernameis said)
Hm... I wish I could give you some type of encouragement, but I can't find any words.
Andy has a g/f too, and if i ever asked him out, he'd say no.
Look at it this why... you look 10 times better than a lot of the people at our school. (including myself)
And why Mike turned you down for that stupid...whateverhernameis chick(no relation to SGT. whateverhernameis).. I don't know, but I do know.. he should've been with you.
Don't let him put you down.. even though he seems like he could've been the best, I know there's somone better for you- somewhere.
You just gotta find him.

Best of luck (GREAT POEM...nice to hear you're getting you're emotions out)
~Sara

ps..there's always Mr. Shinoda.


Life of a simple man, taught that everyone else is dirty, and thier love is meaningless... oh, i'm so soiled.

(mudvayne)

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devinechild22
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3 posted 2002-09-26 10:18 PM


  sara u r really crackin me up. but u almost made me cry to. that is sucha a nice thing to say. it was such a kind gesture. i really appreciate it.
PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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4 posted 2002-09-28 02:06 PM


Well you know.....

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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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5 posted 2002-09-28 02:06 PM


I try my best.

Along the way to scarring your ego,
you've straight up ruined me.

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