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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
what to feel dont seem real dying inside help me hide please! hide me dont let him see the scars he left or the theft he charged against my heart i sensed this would become something so dumb that no one could've done but him. You can close your eyes to things you dont want to see,but u cant close your heart to things you dont want to feel. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
I loved how this unfolded. Raw and powerful- thanks for sharing  Are you scared? BOO! Are you now? |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
emotions run deep in this piece. i'm in that place right now. my heart is broken in seven pieces and this piece just made it eight. again, very strong emotion in this piece. you should add a little punctuation. /jen/ so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3 |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
thank u 4 the replies, i'm glad u liked it, i'm going thro a confused time rite now and i dunno wut 2 think anymore.  You can close your eyes to things you dont want to see,but u cant close your heart to things you dont want to feel. |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Thank you for sharing such a wonderful read, I really enjoyed it so make sure you keep on posting them  Andrew If your reading this signature I have replied to your poem, please repay the compliment :) |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
thanks Zu, i'm glad u liked it! You can close your eyes to things you dont want to see,but u cant close your heart to things you dont want to feel. |
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