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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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I don't suppose truth can slice it's own way out of the gum drops and mood rings, the raindrops and clouds. And I wonder if I should take hold of the knife slice open the wound again allow the truth to seep out and stain my clothes. My mood ring is amber my fingers are cold my heart says it's tired my soul feels too warn to expose the truth. Blind ones don't see Well, I'm blind to the core truth is not visible not an ounce can be seen and I don't suppose truth. Snowflakes and candy canes, teddy bears, choco-later, smiles, hugs, kisses, maybe those would mean something if I could suppose truth. "You're the center of adrenaline And I'm beginning to understand You could be the best thing about me." -SG [This message has been edited by Allysa (09-25-2002 11:33 AM).] |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Truth is extremely tricky, in fact. How can you define truth? How can it be supposed? In what instances is it best to let truth fester within, and when should you slice yourself open, as you put it, to stain yourself in your bitter truth? It's really difficult to figure out at times. Kudos on the thoughtful write. Parasite Learn to place poetry before people |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Thank your for sharing this great poem with us, I really enjoyed the read  Andrew If your reading this signature I have replied to your poem, please repay the compliment :) |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
My problem with Truth is that I never know when someone is telling me the truth, especially not when it pertains to the male gender. This has to do with an ex-boyfriend, the evil one from hell, Justin. Chances are, if you're a guy and you say something to me, most likely something nice, I won't believe you. My *friend* (you know who you are..) finds this to be frustrating, but that's the way I am. I am not a very trusting person, I am a very truthful person. It has caused me to loose a few friends in the past... Anyway, yeah. Thank you both very very much.  I have a dance tomorrow and I get to wear a pretty dress and take pictures and dance... yay! "You're the center of adrenaline And I'm beginning to understand You could be the best thing about me." -SG |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
you did a really good job exploring truth like this. i would elaborate more, but my fingers are tingling again, so i think i should go lay down. i really enjoyed some of the lines in this piece. good job. and thanks for the read. /jen/ i just haven't been the same since that house fell on my sister. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this was rather well done. Probably one of my favorites from you since its so profound. I do look forward to more from you Allysa  This post has been brought to you by the 'Totally Awesome Society of Puerto Rican Egotistical Sexy Men'. |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
see!! what did i tell you? ::paranoid eyes dart around the room:: you will never catch up to me mr dopey!! muhahahahahaha. ::evil laugh:: /jen/ at first i wondered why white oleander was in the six dollar bargain bin. |
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clumsy Member
since 2002-10-10
Posts 106canada. |
this was... just beautiful... and that's the truth. |
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