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devinechild22
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since 2002-08-28
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0 posted 2002-09-24 05:14 PM



perfection
the highest standard to most
if we r not perfect we r not accepted
if we r not accepted then what r we?
perfection
when i look into the mirror i hate the perso i see
i wonder who i am..who is staring back at me
i sit here and i cry
this life is tearing me down
like u do to me
u all
u don`t accept me 4 who i am
u don`t care how i feel inside
i wish that u would just take a look inside my head
perfection
are these bitter actions 4 the better
i think not
u are my friends yet when i am down u kick me
u want to like me but u push me aside
why is this?
perfection

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anya
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since 2002-07-27
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London, UK
1 posted 2002-09-25 04:29 AM


perfection doesn't exist, absoloutly nobody is perfect, but anyway I hope writing this helped you out, a bit of a vent, we all feel like that sometimes, hope you feel better soon!

Anya

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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2 posted 2002-09-25 07:01 PM


I do believe Anya is correct, Miss Allison. (heh)
You and I both know that no one has mastered perfection... even though people..(males) that we feel so stronly about feel perfect, until they won't let us in... then we slowly find thier flaws, and pick at them.

That's revenge... mah haha!!!

Take care, things will get better.
(don't quote me on that, j/j)
~sara

P.S.. that was really brave of you- you should be proud for even trying... and you know what i'm talking about.

Life of a simple man, taught that everyone else is dirty, and thier love is meaningless... oh, i'm so soiled.

(mudvayne)

Local Parasite
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3 posted 2002-09-26 03:17 PM


Perfection is perception.

Percieve yourself as perfection.  That is the key to perfection.

Trust me, I know what I'm talking about.  

Parasite

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