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Teen Poetry #6

Love???

ShadyMakaveli
Member

since 2002-08-21

Posts 128

0 posted 2002-09-24 02:38 AM

Unable to let go
Living two different worlds
A love i will never know
Feelings to be unfurled

Only when i see fit
Unless my feelings take control
Scared, don't wanna risk it
Your the mate for my soul

Not a feeling, I know
That's why it hurts so deep
Without you i'm in woe
Thinking of you while i sleep

Not reality, but a fantasy
A mere dream that's reachable
Visions of you and me
Are becoming more believable

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

1 posted 2002-09-24 02:50 AM

"Not a feeling, I know
                                                        That's why it hurts so deep
                                                          Without you i'm in woe
                                                       Thinking of you while i sleep"

I so feel this. My body can feel it, the snails down the fence can feel it. I know what you're saying in this and its amazing that someone out there can put what I've felt on so many occasions down. It's a great feeling, but then one of the more scary feelings at the same time. I enjoyed this post..hope to read more from you soon.

Are you scared? BOO! Are you now?

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

2 posted 2002-09-24 03:01 PM

It's good to see you finally exploring other forms of rhyme scheme. I think this turned out beautifully.

Could you send me an email please? I've got some questions for you.

Thanks in advance,
Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

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