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devinechild22
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since 2002-08-28
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0 posted 2002-09-23 10:29 PM


i sit and wait in anticipation
the clock ticks so slowly
yet so quickly
i wait
for the answer
is it yes?
is it no?
will i ever know?
how do u feel?
r u nervous too?
i wonder..
have i ever felt this way?
r u going to turn me down?
when u answer will i frown?
i wait in anticipation..


© Copyright 2002 Allison Colgrove - All Rights Reserved
cherish
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since 2001-03-25
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swimming in fairy floss...........
1 posted 2002-09-24 03:44 AM


I know the feeling, let's just hope you're not sitting in a doctors' surgery awaiting HIV results or worse hope whatever youre waiting for is positive.

Are you scared? BOO! Are you now?

Local Parasite
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2 posted 2002-09-24 03:06 PM


So at the start you sit and wait, but at the end, you don't sit anymore... what's the significance of that?  I'm having trouble seeing what you're trying to say.

Nicely written.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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since 2002-07-02
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3 posted 2002-09-24 04:32 PM


Oh Allison...
It's gonna be alright. (as i've said about 40 times today)
there's better than him.. i mean- when I used to have a thing for him I'd think...
Oh I like him so much, but I know there's soemone that can treat me better.
Think of it that way...
You know... who would want a pervert boyfriend anyway!??

Best Of Luck,
Sara

Life of a simple man, taught that everyone else is dirty, and thier love is meaningless... oh, i'm so soiled.

(mudvayne)

devinechild22
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4 posted 2002-09-24 04:56 PM


thanks sara. you may not know it but those little it`s okays make a difference. i`m still sad tho.....o well i guess i can find some cute guy that actually likes me? maybe. john tonkavich called jennifer a b**** so i might stay away from him...altho he is right. lol thank u for your replies all..and no i am not waiting to see if i have hiv.
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