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Perception is person
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Perception is person |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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Perception is person. What has this world shown you, Grand opening ribbons or police caution tape? God brought me into this world with an open hand, I pity those who saw a fist, for they must endure their own. Aspirations aren’t imagined, they are idolized. Never stop searching for greatness. I'm on my feet, I'm on the floor, I'm good to go |
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LadyDracaWolf Member
since 2002-09-19
Posts 73CA |
A very positive message is portrayed in this poem. I very well think that you shouldn't let ppl define who you are, but you should define who you are because you are the only one who can be you. Death is not extinguishing the light; |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
'Never stop searching for greatness', never was a truer word said! Anyway I liked the images you used here, very clever, I enjoyed this very much, Anya |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
really good poem! as usual nice pic too. lol. i always like your stuff! write more often. you should cause u r so good.  xxoo ok i`ve got a crush. talk to me sometime! my sn is antsmarching2299 lol i am so hitting on you. i`m sorry u r prolly blushing.ok bye bye for now. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
LOL @ devinechild. Kevin~ This is an awesome write! I REALLY like it! I love the positive message in your words. You keep writing and I'll keep reading. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
"Perception is person." I couldn't agree more. In fact, all that anyone truly is, is the sum of their percieved realities. What exists to any person is nothing more than a translation of their sensory stimuli. Without any of these translations, where would we be? Perception is person, there is no doubt in my mind about that. In fact, perception is what creates the illusion of reality. Personally I didn't see the "positive" message that everyone else was groping at. "Never stop searching for greatness?" That's almost despairing... like it can never be found, so never stop searching for it... because it is that search, that you can only ever expect. Greatness is relative, and always will there be something we idolize, as you put it... so the more you reach, the more you have to reach for. Parasite Learn to place poetry before people |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
vlraynes... what is so funny?? lol no i`m just jokin but come on now ladies u have to agree that kevin is cute! lol i am so sorry i must be makin a mockery of myself. lol anyway....he is cute tho! |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
devinechild~ Yes...I admit he is cute. I honestly wasn't laughing to be mean. I just thought your 'crush' was cute. Sorry if I came across wrong. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
no no vicky u weren`t wrong at all. i was just jokin around. i knew that u were just messin around. lol everbody is so nice here. i admire everybody and i wish i was as good of a poet as every one else.. o well..kevin u r still a cutie! |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Everyone's jonesing for you Kev. You must love it here  I like your work a lot, keep it coming. Jenn Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving? |
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