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NeverSayDie
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since 2001-01-18

Posts 39
Duluth, MN & Grand Forks ND

0 posted 2002-09-19 03:34 PM

I think that I am falling
Deep in love with you.

I can't control my heart
Because it belongs to you.

I'm not sure I can say it
But I know that it is true.

Each time I see you smiling
My heart takes a leap.

I think about you every day
And even in my sleep.

You may not know it quite yet
but very soon you will.

I'm try to express my love
But my lips are still.

I hope you can understand
The words will come some day.

But till then this poem must do
What my word will say.

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

1 posted 2002-09-19 08:55 PM

this is such a beautiful poem! I can`t believe no one has replied to it! Keeep writing because u r an amazing writer!this poem discribed something i`m going through right now.

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2002-09-19 11:44 PM

This is so sweet! Whoever she is, she's extremely lucky. Good luck!

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Match
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since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

3 posted 2002-09-19 11:45 PM

Loved this times 1000000000000000000

~*Azi*~

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
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4 posted 2002-09-20 09:46 AM

I echo the rest.
Wonderful sentiment.

Jenn

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LadyDracaWolf
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since 2002-09-19

Posts 73
CA

5 posted 2002-09-20 10:23 AM

Wow. This is incredible.
The words "I love you" have been echoed throughout the ages and are most beautifully expressed in poetry. And some poems really stick out.
-This is one of them.

NeverSayDie
Junior Member

since 2001-01-18

Posts 39
Duluth, MN & Grand Forks ND

6 posted 2002-09-20 10:39 AM

Thank you very much everyone, I gave it to her last night. She was speechless. Thanks for all the compliments.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

7 posted 2002-10-18 01:30 PM

NeverSayDie~
This is such a beautiful expression of your love.
Sometimes we say it louder by NOT saying the words.
I'm glad to hear that she 'was speechless'.
Nicely done.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

8 posted 2002-10-18 07:25 PM

I really liked this one a lot. I have felt this on a daily basis for the past 7 and a half years. Not necessarily about one girl, even though I have, but mainly about life in general. Sometimes a poem is all you can do, but sometimes a poem is all you'll ever need.

Well done.

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