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Tiger Junior Member
since 2002-08-18
Posts 24Queensland, Australia |
~*Princess*~ We shared the moonlight bliss When you gave me a goodnight kiss You gave me 20seconds to respond to "I LOVE YOU" You repeated what you said although it did not make much sense. You did call me Princess, but what you had said was infact Princess Jess... How long have we been? 10,15 or 20 weeks? Do you really love me underneith it all? You say yes but who is this Jess! You said there was nobody else but let me guess that this Princess Jess was infact... Ohh let me guess one of my friends which we both befriend? Well I took a guess, am I right? Now sort it out and clear up this mess! Please tell me now who you truely love- me or Jess? -Tiger ~*I'm not deaf, I'm just ignoring you*~ |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Bravo! This piece is very well written. A lot of quirky rhyming floating around... the tone of this is so riddlish and confused, and yet the subject matter is more of a serious one. I thought that the contrastive tone in this poem, when looking at its subject matter, is a very unique idea. Almost inspiring. Great work, you've made my day.  Parasite Learn to place poetry before people |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Oooh, ouch. Did that really happen? Good work on the poem. Can I beat him? I have a lizard, and his name is Jake. |
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