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CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2002-09-14 09:10 PM

I wrote this one about church camp, the day before we had to leave. Anyway, just thought I'd make sure ya'll didn't think I was leaving PIP.

GOODBYE FOR NOW

Goodbye for now
To the friends I’ve made
And the people who have
Loved me for being me

Hello to the real world
To the merciless judgment
Of right and wrong
And of who I am

But I’ll never have left
In my mind and soul
I’ll keep living in this place
Where love is always found

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-09-15 07:03 AM

Every now and then God lets us have that special moment in time where we literally say, "I shall remember THIS moment..." and we are strengthened by it to go into our futures, and face our unknowns. This brought back a lot of good memories, and I thank you for sharing yours!

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

2 posted 2002-09-15 12:30 PM

hey love is always there with everyone you meet.. you just have to reach for it a littl here and there.. believe me, i know. im a cashier for a supermarket

Local Parasite

Member Elite

since 2001-11-05

Posts 2527
Transylconia, Winnipeg

3 posted 2002-09-16 12:39 PM

This is very positive. I like how it's kept brief, it's almost something you could write in a card. Very sweet.

You used a good form of structure here and a nice discretion pertaining to length. Nicely done.

Parasite

Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
~Andrey Kneller

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2002-09-20 01:47 AM

Those are the kinds of memories that will last a lifetime.
Very well express, Cody.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

LadyDracaWolf
Member

since 2002-09-19

Posts 73
CA

5 posted 2002-09-20 10:30 AM

Very well stated. The real world can be cruel, but can be rewarding too.

Death is not extinguishing the light;
it is putting out the lamp
because the dawn has come.

Rabindranath Tagore
Poet, Philosopher, Nobel Laurea

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